Great work. I can see where your going with it. on your paper for this assignment, write down the advanced effects you used. We will talk about these on monday. Also write down these changes I want you to make. It should be finished up at least to 20 seconds. That being said, I like the direction your going and the pseudo 3d feel to it. Here are the corrections I want you to make as well as finishing it. Upload your rough finalized as soon as you can and let me know when it gets up. Judging by what you have up here are my fixes that I want you to make. 1. when the manaquin comes on screen, really sell that animation for the "protection" 2. its hard to read that the words are shooting the vest. when the vest is floating, move it to the left side of the sceen and fire across the screen at it and have it react a little. 3. finish the rest and email so I can see the other portions.
Great work. I can see where your going with it. on your paper for this assignment, write down the advanced effects you used. We will talk about these on monday. Also write down these changes I want you to make. It should be finished up at least to 20 seconds. That being said, I like the direction your going and the pseudo 3d feel to it. Here are the corrections I want you to make as well as finishing it. Upload your rough finalized as soon as you can and let me know when it gets up. Judging by what you have up here are my fixes that I want you to make.
ReplyDelete1. when the manaquin comes on screen, really sell that animation for the "protection"
2. its hard to read that the words are shooting the vest. when the vest is floating, move it to the left side of the sceen and fire across the screen at it and have it react a little.
3. finish the rest and email so I can see the other portions.
good work!
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